http://youtu.be/Hvm7f9IQME0
This is the video let me know what you guys think...
Thanks Mark

ShysDad wrote:http://youtu.be/Hvm7f9IQME0
This is the video let me know what you guys think...
Thanks Mark
Cary wrote:Mark, there is so much good stuff there that it might be worth having a more professional video person redo it, reorganizing it somewhat. I'm not trying to be unnecessarily critical, but it it's going to have impact, it has to grab attention from the beginning, and keep it throughout. I think what you have is a great start, but a good editor could make it much more impactful--and I think that's what you're shooting for.
Hang in there. A lot of us have prayed and will pray for you and your family.
Cary

Cary wrote:Mark, there is so much good stuff there that it might be worth having a more professional video person redo it, reorganizing it somewhat. I'm not trying to be unnecessarily critical, but it it's going to have impact, it has to grab attention from the beginning, and keep it throughout. I think what you have is a great start, but a good editor could make it much more impactful--and I think that's what you're shooting for.
Hang in there. A lot of us have prayed and will pray for you and your family.
Cary
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