Sorry I seem to have posted doubles of a couple of chapters, don't read the same one twice or you will be deeply confused.

I think chapter 10 is where the airplane comes into the story, see I promised it would have one.

Shane- I'm hooked. Thanks for a great read. -DP

great story Shane.

Not many new posts today- everybody must still be enjoying shorton's latest. But he was too modest to start a thread just for feedback. How about using this one?

Hey Shorton,

I really enjoyed the story. Thank you very much for taking the time to write it. Any of that story come out of your background?

Yeah I suppose so, I fly, I have worked as a guide, Old man Horton is partly my Dad and my father in law. I have been into Baja several times.

I havn't had a full grown bear get ahold of me and I have never been stabbe by a Marlin.

So yes the story comes from my life and from people who I have known.

I am very glad you liked it.

Shane